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The Girl withthe Crimson Scarf by ~machen-sie-mich-blut:iconmachen-sie-mich-blut:



Many times I had seen her,
carefully sliding through the dark.
The seconds where she slipped into the light,
of a streetlamp...
Face, beautiful...yet...lost.
Eyes, sparkling...yet..empty.
Scarf, fluttering velvet in the wind.

One night I awoke to the sound of crystal glass breaking.
The sound of an angel bleeding,
The sound of the girl with the velvet scarf lying in the light,
with shards of crystal sprinkled down her face.
I crept from my home,
in the death of night.
I crept to her side,
I held her head as the shards fell down,
I watched her cry till the white dove sang.

For the first time I saw,
her face didn't look as smooth and true up close,
in fact there were scars, blood, pain splashed upon her.
For the first time I saw,
her eyes didn't sparkle up close,
in fact they were dull and void, like the eyes of death.
For the first time I saw her scarf, was not velvet...
it was silk, torn and tattered silk...a scrap of material.

It was that night,
where for the first time in my life...
I fell in love.

I fell in love with the girl with the crimson scarf.
:iconmachen-sie-mich-blut:

Author's Comments

Not enough space for title...


*cough*


Um..poem.

Hope you like it.

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:iconsilver-elph:
This is beautiful Amie!
:hug:

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~Elphia~
:iconcalebaaronosment:
I know that girl.

Nice work, yet again. :+fav:

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can I keep you? :eager:
:iconle-morte-de-moi:
fave fave fave fave

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floating forgotten through the void
:iconpirate-soul:
Stunning... so beautiful...

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With love from beans
:iconbonsai-forest:
beautiful imagery and detail. well done

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reality is merely an illusion, albeit a very persistent one
:iconengel-des-todes:
It's a beautiful poem... but who is she?

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"Well of course there are gremlins in Tetris and Dr. Mario! Who ELSE makes those bloody blocks speed up like that?! Certainly not Santa Claus."

:heart:

(Suppose I should link to myself too... [link] )
:iconkleptomermaid:
purty... when i first looked at it i thought it migh tbe about you... your "alterego" but then you said you fell in love with her.. so... yes

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if homosexuality is a disease, then lets all call in "queer" to work... :dance:
:iconshanraii:
Absolutely wonderfully done!! I think that, somehow, we can all relate to this in some way. instant :+favlove:

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When you have insomnia, you're never really asleep...and you're never really awake.
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~swimboy5002
:iconunwanted3:
i love this so much! :+fav:

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-Morgan

..i.don't.care.that.you.left.and.abandoned.me..
..what.hurts.more.is.that.i'd.still.die.for.you..

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August 28, 2005
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