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Feel.
What do I feel?
Love? Hate?
Hurt? Lust?
I know what I want to feel.
I know how I want to feel when I'm with you...
But would I really be able to tell you how I feel?

Feel.
How do you feel?
Angry? Sad?
Like? Dislike?
I know how I want you to feel.
I know how I want you to feel when your with me.
But would you really tell me how you feel?

A new love.
One whose life and thoughts I know nothing about.

A new hand.
One whose fingers can slide so simply between mine.

A new heart.
One that beats...well thats a start.

A new life.
Different and strange, but straining to show me its wonders.

A new feeling.
Indescribable.
Yet begging to spill onto paper.
Unknown.
Yet familiar.

Feel.
Feel.
Feel.
How do we feel?
:iconmachen-sie-mich-blut:

Author's Comments

A poem.
About a person.
ABout a thing.
About a feeling.

Crappy.

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:iconchildofthekorn666:
I feel like this poem is awesome, and i loveses you! *hugattack*

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:pride:

"Drop food on the kids while you're murderin' their fathers."

"A male chicken is called a rooster..."
"Or Glen."
:iconcalebaaronosment:
Très magnifique.

It's down-to-earth and simple, which is what I like about it.

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can I keep you? :eager:
:iconmachen-sie-mich-blut:
Thankyou.

*hugsback*

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:hug::sing::blowkiss:

:heart: :heart:

"Everyone is entilted to my opinion"

"If your parents never had children, chances are you won't either"
---I'm a child of the daisies---
:iconmachen-sie-mich-blut:
Thanks Bo.

:)

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:hug::sing::blowkiss:

:heart: :heart:

"Everyone is entilted to my opinion"

"If your parents never had children, chances are you won't either"
---I'm a child of the daisies---
:iconnickstooge:
its got parts that are blunt and to the point but it still has slight parts of confusion, i like it.

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I am nick, and i will eat your soul...or not...depends on how you taste...
:iconmachen-sie-mich-blut:
Thanks! :D

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:hug::sing::blowkiss:

:heart: :heart:

"Everyone is entilted to my opinion"

"If your parents never had children, chances are you won't either"
---I'm a child of the daisies---
:iconblackmoggy:
ha! know what you mean...
awesome poem, so true =)
:iconblackmoggy:
*faves* by the way =P

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