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Daddy, in my garden...
where nothing ever grows.
I crawled through the bramble.
I went places no-one knows.
I found a grave.
I cried.


Daddy, in my garden...
where the flowers have gone.
I slept under a dead tree.
I looked up at strangled branches.
A noose swung in the breeze.
I sighed.


Daddy, in my garden...
where nobody goes.
I saw a lady, old and grey.
She looked at me and held a rose.
She beckoned me with bony hands.
I complied.

Daddy, in my garden...
where you never went.
I saw you lying on the ground.
Your eyes were sad and your shoulders bent,
over the body of a girl.
I died.
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Something rather odd that I thought of.

When are the things I think of not odd...?

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:iconkaya-strissa:
Hmm, I really like this one. It's not in your usual style, I don't think, but it's got something very original about it... not sure what it is, but it's definitely its own work, nothing stolen from others.

I likes :D

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"Your d12 cries itself to sleep." -OOTS
:iconmusicalgal99:
Amie, that was beautiful. I loved the repeared "Daddy, in my garden..." so sad...many loves to you!

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musical_gal :sing:

"the greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return." ~Moulin Rouge~
:iconmachen-sie-mich-blut:
Yay! Thankyou Miss Zzuzz.

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"Everyone is entilted to my opinion"

"If your parents never had children, chances are you won't either"
---I'm a child of the daisies---
:iconschnoodlle:
I want to draw it

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:iconkaya-strissa:
*snugglehugs* :glomp:

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"Your d12 cries itself to sleep." -OOTS
:iconthylacine-girl:
*sinff* Tis lovely and sad.

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Always remember: you're unique, just like everybody else.
:iconsignati:
I like the tone. It's like something off a Tim Burton movie - Nightmare Before Christmas, The Corpse Bride, etc...

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I think, therefore I am. ...I think.

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